My favourite poem that I've written is about the memory I had when I first got Chocolate and Marshmallow. (My guinea-pigs) (They're super cute!) I like this poem because it gives me good memories of when I first got them and they were so tiny! Chocolate has been my best best best friend for 3 years and he is always there when I'm sad. But now he's gone. so yeah.
Guinea-pigs scurrying
In a box
Speed bumps everywhere
Hushed squeaks
An abrupt stop
The engine dies
Car doors slam
More hushed squeaks
The lid is lifted
Two perfect guinea-pigs
Warm caramel coloured
Chocolate and Marshmallow
Frightened sniffs
Agitated twitches
Gentle ruffles
At last, home sweet home
I've read this before and btw I am laughing out loud HAHAHAHAHA!!!!
ReplyDeleteNice poem Claire
ReplyDeleteawesome Poem Claire!
ReplyDeletethis is so deep nice job!
ReplyDeleteVery deep and wonderful poem, Miss Chan. What a tragic event that must have been for you. Well done on your post.
ReplyDeleteThanks Severus Snape. XD It was heartbreaking.
Deletethat sounds like an awesome poem
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem
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